ext_1653 ([identity profile] fantasyenabler.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hth 2005-09-02 04:27 pm (UTC)

Oh. My. God.

This was *fantastic.* I *love* how much thought you've put into Ronon. His background. His beliefs. His personality. And how well you've crafted your ideas of him so that they're believable within the context of the canon we've seen thus far. I also love the way you have him view John, and the way you have them interact is *lovely.* It's so much more complex than some sort of Alpha versus Alpha, Dom versus Sub relationship, i.e. the way you could have had this play out. Instead, it's more a meshing of different beliefs, military cultures, and approaches to life, adding layers to this story that I would to see play out sometime in the show.

Wonderfully done! Just wonderful. :)

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