This story was like..wow. You've got Ronon's voice just...perfect. I can imagine him with these thoughts adn feelings and beliefs. With the past you have given him based on what little canon we have.

And Sheppard was just...sheppard. In the first of these I hadnt' found him to be the Sheppard I'm used too, but he was that Sheppard here and I just adore Shep and Ronon and this was THEM in a totally believable way. In a way that plays off the dynamic on my TV screen.