Gah, this is gorgeous. Hothothotsex, of course, but also a wonderful glimpse into each of the characters, filtered through the perception of the others. Not a single word that seems out of place -- every thought, gesture and line of dialogue rings perfectly true to the boys and to the dynamic between them that you've created here.
And, um, did I mention it was HOT? Because, yeah.
I've been a (woefully silent) fan of your writing since your Oz days, and this is exactly why. I can't tell how you excited I was to find you writing in my new favorite sandbox. ;-)
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Date: 2005-08-30 10:28 am (UTC)From:And, um, did I mention it was HOT? Because, yeah.
I've been a (woefully silent) fan of your writing since your Oz days, and this is exactly why. I can't tell how you excited I was to find you writing in my new favorite sandbox. ;-)