Thank you! That was a particularly auditory line for me, too. I love going back and checking over my dialogue to kind of play it in that fucking adorable drawl of John's and make sure it jibes, but some of them just come out of the box in his voice, and that's gold.
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Date: 2005-09-13 04:40 pm (UTC)From:Glad you liked the story!