Wow, lots of food for thought here, definitely requiring repeated readings. :)
I like your Citida back story a lot; it all dovetails nicely into the glimpses of character we've gotten with Ronon.
This may sound weird, but I find it interesting that as playful as Ronon was with Rodney, he's not that way with Sheppard. There's something really...intense...about the relationship between Sheppard and Ronon. I found it trying to write them, and I'm reading it in this story, too. Part of it may be the circumstances, but there's just something deep and powerful running between them, and I wish I could spend the whole day thinking on it!
My favorite line of this one:
“I hate to bring out the big guns, but I did let you fuck my boyfriend, so you kind of owe me one.”
Which made me laugh even in the midst of the intensity.
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Date: 2005-09-02 01:22 pm (UTC)From:I like your Citida back story a lot; it all dovetails nicely into the glimpses of character we've gotten with Ronon.
This may sound weird, but I find it interesting that as playful as Ronon was with Rodney, he's not that way with Sheppard. There's something really...intense...about the relationship between Sheppard and Ronon. I found it trying to write them, and I'm reading it in this story, too. Part of it may be the circumstances, but there's just something deep and powerful running between them, and I wish I could spend the whole day thinking on it!
My favorite line of this one:
“I hate to bring out the big guns, but I did let you fuck my boyfriend, so you kind of owe me one.”
Which made me laugh even in the midst of the intensity.