Hope That Holds.

I really, really enjoyed this whole series. In fact, I think you might have broken my heart. Every word is completely in their voices, and every impossible action is totally believable. You really nailed Ronon, dude. I really don't know what else to say, I am sort of in the post-orgasmic haze of a reading frenzy. Because of course once I started reading, there was no stopping. I really loved how you switched around the narratives, and fleshed out all three of them with a an actual sense of individualism in their motives. I love the way John is in love with Rodney, I love the way Ronon sees both of them, I love the way Rodney is such a raging slut. It really makes a lot of sense, the way you tell it. And the sex! Lordy, woman! If I knew you in real life, I'd tap that no matter what you look like. Sensual must be a way of life for you, because ROWR. From the way you write, I'd say that you approach relationships with a passion that'd blow one's hair back. Seriously, go out with me. I'll give you sane, detailed and deserving feedback later. In the meantime, I think you should just let me pleasure you. LITTLE ELSE WOULD SATISFY ME NOW.