I've re-read this a couple of times now, and I think it's great. I admit to having some trouble coming up with any worthwhile comments beyond that one, but I'll do my best.
Pros: - I like this concept; it's not something I expected from the theme (Terra Incognita). - I keep trying to find an articulate way to say this, and it seems to be beyond me. I'll stumble on regardless. I am, and always have been, impressed by the rhythm of language in your work. There's a flow to it, a cadence that keeps me reading to the end. It's very present here. Good stuff.
Obligatory Con: - You used the word 'psychocriminologist'! You used the word 'psychocriminologist'! Now we must fight... to the death!
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Date: 2005-03-01 02:46 pm (UTC)From:Pros:
- I like this concept; it's not something I expected from the theme (Terra Incognita).
- I keep trying to find an articulate way to say this, and it seems to be beyond me. I'll stumble on regardless. I am, and always have been, impressed by the rhythm of language in your work. There's a flow to it, a cadence that keeps me reading to the end. It's very present here. Good stuff.
Obligatory Con:
- You used the word 'psychocriminologist'! You used the word 'psychocriminologist'! Now we must fight... to the death!