i really DO want world peace!
Aug. 12th, 2003 02:47 pmSo after A Certain Amount of Time cooking up this novel idea, my problem right now is that it's too damn big. Not just in the sense of long -- I think I'm attacking it like a television show, as if I think I'm going to have to keep it running for eight years, and I want to make sure there's plenty of room for new stories to come along. (Heh, now that I think about it, it's not entirely *un*like The X-Files. Only with intrigue instead of conspiracy, and instead of the FBI -- barbarians. Look, just take my word for it.)
After watching it not work and not work and not work for weeks now, I'm trying to deconstruct and diagnose, and here's my problem, I think. If Chekoi remains the main character (and since I generate characters in batches, it's not always a guarantee that the one I was originally viewing as the protagonist will stay in that spot), that character goal thing that's supposed to drive the plot forward? It's just too *much.* It's very true to the way people think and feel -- he wants to change the world, and lord knows plenty of people want to do that, at one time or another in their lives -- but it's not a *story.* I have this whole infrastructure of race and culture conflict, and where he fits into it, and his political sympathies and the complications thereof. But it's not a story.
I dunno, I'm fishing, and I'm not even sure what for. What do you DO if you want to save the world? (The fact that I don't know the answer to this question might be indicative of bigger problems than just this novel, but let's not focus on that right now.)
After watching it not work and not work and not work for weeks now, I'm trying to deconstruct and diagnose, and here's my problem, I think. If Chekoi remains the main character (and since I generate characters in batches, it's not always a guarantee that the one I was originally viewing as the protagonist will stay in that spot), that character goal thing that's supposed to drive the plot forward? It's just too *much.* It's very true to the way people think and feel -- he wants to change the world, and lord knows plenty of people want to do that, at one time or another in their lives -- but it's not a *story.* I have this whole infrastructure of race and culture conflict, and where he fits into it, and his political sympathies and the complications thereof. But it's not a story.
I dunno, I'm fishing, and I'm not even sure what for. What do you DO if you want to save the world? (The fact that I don't know the answer to this question might be indicative of bigger problems than just this novel, but let's not focus on that right now.)