Date: 2006-05-25 01:31 am (UTC)From: [identity profile] exegesis.livejournal.com
Liked it? *Liked it?*

As you are about my only source of Rodney/Ronon (damn, there needs to be more of that! I love McShep, but McDex is severely neglected in this fandom), of course I liked it!

Having said that, I loved it for its characterisation - John's inability to deal while everyone else has no trouble and in particular, I adored Ronon's cherishing of Rodney, especially with the Satedan language. You really do convey the depth of emotion there - how Rono is quiet, but deep in his devotion and Rodney just really doesn't know how to deal with someone who loves him unconditionally.

On a concrit note, there are a couple of typos - nothing major, just some dropped letters - 'yo' instead of you, 'ths' instead of 'this', stuff like that. No real biggies.

Thank you for sharing! I think you now hold the record for the longest McDex fic in existence! COngratulations! ;-)

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