In the Hands of Yes
by Hth
32,834 words of Aliens Made Them Get Married, and don't say I never gave you anything!
"There’s a ritual, Colonel! Do you know what *kind* of ritual? You have no idea! There could be – it could be dangerous, or, or – perverse!"
by Hth
32,834 words of Aliens Made Them Get Married, and don't say I never gave you anything!
"There’s a ritual, Colonel! Do you know what *kind* of ritual? You have no idea! There could be – it could be dangerous, or, or – perverse!"
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Date: 2006-05-25 01:56 am (UTC)From:Yes! I'm glad somebody noticed! *g* Actually, it was huge, geeky fun to work all those tossed-off in jokes into the story, from the recurring argument about whether the first three months of their relationship count to John's friendly relationship with Food Services. (Actually, my favorite was making Jeannie say "he must be smart, or you wouldn't have the time of day for him," just because the time of day was exactly how Rodney figured out he *was* smart *g*)
I'm glad the John plotline worked for you. One of the reasons I wanted to write this story (besides, you know -- Aliens Make Them Get Married!) was because I was thinking about all those stories where two people on the team pair off, and how that really would shake up the emotional dynamics. So it was always pretty much John's story as much as anything.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Date: 2006-05-25 05:27 am (UTC)From:(And that icon is wonderful!)