new fic: Satisfaction (SGA, Rodney/Ronon)

[hth]

Satisfaction
by Hth and linabean
Rodney/Ronon

Summary:
THE BEST DAMN 18,000 WORD NC-17 ROMANTIC COMEDY ABOUT IMPOTENCE YOU WILL READ ALL YEAR! (And by "best," we mean "only.")

From the Credit Where Credit is Due Department:
So basically, it works like this. The plot and all the really funny lines came from Caroline. Most of the sex and the talking about their feelings came from me. Rodney, Ronon, Sheppard, and everyone else in the story came from, I don't know, Cooper and Wright and some committee at Paramount. I don't even wanna know where Flesh Gordon 2: Flesh Gordon and the Cosmic Cheerleaders came from. liviapenn came from heaven above and delivered an excellent beta.

WARNINGS:
Mild s3 spoilers, including the usual for "Sunday." Swearing. Sex. Alcohol. Talking about feelings. Talking about Rodney's weight. Many, many italics. Sheppard using the word "penis" a lot. Manly tears -- no, just kidding about that one! There's no crying this time.

Comments

[kylielee1000.livejournal.com]

Rodney put his hands lightly on the back of Ronon’s head and wanted fiercely to have the power to make Ronon feel half – half of what his most careless touch made Rodney feel.

This is my favorite line, because it's a summary for the entire fic. I simply love this, with the hotness and the empathy and Rodney wondering what the HELL. I also really like that it ends not on mutual orgasm, but on communication. Nice.

Thank you so much!

[kylielee1000.livejournal.com]

PS! The link you provide at the bottom of the text of the fic, to Caroline's journal, is friendslocked: http://linabean.livejournal.com/46223.html?mode=reply. Perhaps fix?

(Feel free to delete this comment, of course.)